Distillation: A Poem
I wrote this a few months back, but it came to mind today because I spent hours this week wrestling with a song. Knowing that I’m recording it in a matter of days ramps up the pressure to get it right–or, as right as I can get it. It’s a relief sometimes to remember that, as hard as I try to say what I mean to the listener, in the end, the song (or poem) is going to do whatever it wants.
DISTILLATION
It’s hard to choose,
Among all that is
And all that is not,
One small thing
To make much of:
One cell,
One star,
One wind,
One wound,
One old broken truck,
One undeniable infatuation
With one untouchable soul;
To pen a span of words
With myriad meanings,
Arranged just so, in order
That they might mean
That one single thing
Which can mean
A million things–
Depending on
The reader,
And the hour
He or she reads it,
And the angle of light,
And the heart’s condition,
And the temperature of the air,
And the presence(Or absence)
Of demons
Or angels,
Personal
Or impersonal,
And the song that played
In the bakery and mingled
Perfectly with the aroma and
Aerated the anger, just enough
That the poem might seed the soul
With a fleeting, sacred silence–
Just enough to plant the secret
God is telling–the one thing
We’re all dying to discover–
Even if we have to find it
In a poem.
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26 Comments
492 days ago
A poem about writing poetry. Brilliant.
492 days ago
This is one I’ll be coming back to. It says a lot of things I often try to say. And isn’t that what a good poem should do, say for us what we are often trying to say?
Nice work, Mr. Peterson.
492 days ago
Amen!
492 days ago
Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Umm… and you might want to fix that “going do do” part. I work with boys and they would have a field day with it.
492 days ago
Inspired
492 days ago
um, poems about poetry are the best. Lovely. Thank you for sharing. (and yay new songs!)
491 days ago
To pen a span of words
With myriad meanings,
Arranged just so, in order
That they might mean
That one single thing
Which can mean
A million things–
Mission accomplished beautifully. Thank you!
491 days ago
Nicely done.
491 days ago
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this.
491 days ago
Magnitude meaning in single words, affected by when and where we hear them…. So true. I’ve been wanting to share Jason Gray’s “A Way to See in the Dark” with a friend, feeling it hits exactly where she’s at, and yet I don’t know if she would “get it” like I did. But I think I need to release it to her and let the Holy Spirit speak as He will.
491 days ago
Andrew,
You just keep going. Aslan is surely on the move.
God bless you. And we’re eager for the new song(s).
491 days ago
Beautiful sound all through the poem and a beautiful cadence, too. I was sweetly struck by the softening “s”sounds of
That the poem might seed the soul
With a fleeting, sacred silence–
getting us ready for the secret God is telling.
Fine work. Thank you for posting it.
491 days ago
Which can mean
A million things–
Depending on
The reader,
And the hour
He or she reads it,
And the angle of light,
And the heart’s condition,
And the temperature of the air,
And…
491 days ago
“One thing I have asked of the Lord
that will I seek after;
to live in the house of the Lord
all the days of my life,
to behold the beauty of the Lord,
and to inquire in his temple” (Psalm 27:4 NRSV).
490 days ago
Wow. That was cool. No other word for it.
490 days ago
Beautiful poem and sweet introduction to it. There is such joy and blessing in the wrestling. (for you as you wrestle with the writing of the song, and for us as we wrestle with the listening to it). Such a GOOD THING. Ooooh ooooh take cover!
490 days ago
“With a fleeting, sacred silence–”
Andrew, your recording of RM’s “Calling Out Your Name” (on Above These City Lights) is profound. Rich nailed the music and words; you and Ben and Andy give it even more.
Thank you.
490 days ago
I really enjoyed this. Message, cadence, sound and all. Definitely my favorite of your poems (the ones I’ve found, of course).
488 days ago
Superb. Poetry usually doesn’t get to me. Perhaps this is just real enough to slip under my defenses. Thank you — and we’re looking forward to the next project!
488 days ago
Brilliant! Beautiful! Change the last line to “In a song,” put it to music, and gift us with it again.
487 days ago
Yes! (re: Thaine) A Song!
If God so wills.
485 days ago
I love the undulating shape of the poem;
each line stopping just short of
or stretched just longer
than the preceding line.
Every phrase working together
to make a beautiful picture.
484 days ago
Came over from Glynn’s. I’m trying to focus on your poem while my daughter is playing piano and my husband is making pancakes, and your poem is about how poetry meets us where we are.
Re-reading now.
481 days ago
n the end, the song (or poem) is going to do whatever it wants…
this makes me think of the way that i pray. i pray with the asterisk…
i want this person to heal*
i beg you to change this situation*
i think you want me to do this*
*but whatever you already know is best, God… so, whatever you say.
at the end of the day, God is going to do what God wants to do, we make a choice to be part of it or to not.
125 days ago
I ran across this poem a few months ago, Andrew. I love it.
125 days ago
Yes. Yes. Yes.
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